Pavli, it is a well organised set of diagrams. One comment would be that I am not overly convinced by your Parti diagrams. The Parti diagram is such an important drawing representing the essence. It looks like some of your images are more inspiration or 3 dimensional representations of the form, but do not capture the organisational essence, the idea.
You are creating a taxonomy. That said, you need to ensure consistency of the information presented per study. For example when you diagramming structure prefer to use orthographic drawings for all studies (not a perspective photos for some studies and elevational photo for others). Similarly for the public/private use the same color legend. At the moment the drawing/diagram family that "suffers" the most is the Parti. Rethink your strategy. A sketch would be a good representation to capture the idea of each project. I would recommend that you are more careful using literal references such as the glasses for the Paris Music School.
Pavli, it is a well organised set of diagrams. One comment would be that I am not overly convinced by your Parti diagrams. The Parti diagram is such an important drawing representing the essence. It looks like some of your images are more inspiration or 3 dimensional representations of the form, but do not capture the organisational essence, the idea.
ReplyDeleteHi Pavli,
ReplyDeleteYou are creating a taxonomy. That said, you need to ensure consistency of the information presented per study. For example when you diagramming structure prefer to use orthographic drawings for all studies (not a perspective photos for some studies and elevational photo for others). Similarly for the public/private use the same color legend. At the moment the drawing/diagram family that "suffers" the most is the Parti. Rethink your strategy. A sketch would be a good representation to capture the idea of each project. I would recommend that you are more careful using literal references such as the glasses for the Paris Music School.